How To Write An Essay in IELTS Writing Task 2?

Hello guys, in this moment I'm going to share about IELTS Writing Task 2. As usual, I do this task to complete my weekly journal in English Studio. Let's read it!!

IELTS Writing Task 2 requires you to write an academic-style essay on a common topic. We have 40 minutes to write at least 250 words.

Task 2 can be broken down and thought about more easily in 5 steps:

1. Question

We must first understand the question to know exactly what the examiner is looking for. One of the biggest mistakes students make is not answering the question properly. 

2. Planning

The students who get the highest marks plan before they write and they often plan for up to 10 minutes. Planning helps you organise your ideas and structure before you write, saving you time and helping you write a clear essay.

3. Introduction

The introduction should tell the examiner what the rest of the essay is about and also answer the question directly. This tells the examiner that you know what you are doing straight away and helps you write your main body paragraphs.

4. Main Body Paragraphs

This is where you give the examiner more detail. You do this by stating your main points and supporting these with explanations and relevant examples.

5. Conclusion

Here you provide a summary of what you have already said in the rest of the essay.

So, I've got a task from my teacher:

International touristm is now the world's largest industry. Unfortunately, this creates tension rather then understanding culture of other people. Do what extent do you agree or disagree?

 

And we can see below for my answer;

Nowadays, international tourism is the immense industry in the world but it creates apprehension rather than recognation between people from different culture. This essay totally disagrees with that opinion because international tourism helps people to learn about various culture and global tourism plays a major role to promote global peace.

Many people are helped to learn numerous cultures by global tourism, for exposuring their new experience to understand about other's culture. Visitors travel from one country to other to try traditional food and learn about their cultural style. For instance, many traditional tourists visit to Nagano, Japan where has landmark such as Matsumono Castle and Miraikan Museum. They also can seek spiritual guidance while they learn Sumo and Kendo, try Yakatori, play Gagaku and wear Kimono. In addition, they can attend a popular traditional ceremony, Yuki Matori which is they might not get it in their country.

In recent years, international tourism is one of the way to promote global peace. It is important to improve cultural awareness by creating a cultural diplomacy in every country in the world. The country will send people as a delegation to attend an international event to introduce their culture in other nation. Therefore, rather than creating tension, international tourism could be an opportunity to share new culture. For instance, Javanese people performed their traditional art, such as Gambyong dance, Macapat song and gamelan in World Culture Forum which was held on 2017 in Toronto, USA.

To summarize, international tourism is important for people from different culture in this world because it provides to enhance the possibility of learning other cultures and global tourism become a top point to advertise global peace.

That's all a little explanation about IELTS Writing Task 2. I got an inspiration to write this material when I join Master Class which is handled by our tutor Ms. Elsa. Thankyou :))

Hope it will be useful!

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